I really enjoyed watching the show cause when we write about I could get more information.
Here is an example of my super duper writing.
The Amazing Super Duper
On Wednesday we had the super duper it was about books that come out. But two actors done it they were Blaze and Ashley. When it had started they sang a song about the books that there going to tell us like the Mum that was a pirate. After that they played it by acting so it could look real. Then they picked up volunteers and then the pirate said “hurry up and scrub the floor. Then a person was laughing and then the pirate told him to come up and walk the plank. Then Super Duper came and said” don’t make him walk the plank!. Then the pirate said” I’m just joking I’m not going to make him walk the plank I’m a kind pirate. The pirate told the people that was scrubbing to get back up. After that there was a next show and it was about a Dr Gizmo that was trying to steal Super Dupers power so he can not defeat her. Then he could not open the book because he was so weak so he got a volunteer to help him open the book then the Dr Gizmo came back. After that she got weaker and weaker so she had to run away then she went back. Then he told us if she comes back out then you shout out your favourite book because that is her weakness. So then she came back out and then we shouted out our favourite book. Then she was so weak she had to go back then super duper saved the day once and again. Super Duper when back home to see his mum then she spotted him and he said” I am going to see your son. Then he went up and he quickly changed. Then he came back down then she said” where's super duper. He went out the window to fly because that's what all superheroes do.
Hi there Daniel
ReplyDeleteYou have recalled everything that happened in the show. I thought the people acted very well. I felt happy that Blaze was able to defeat Dr Gizmo, but I also felt a bit sad for him at the end of the show. Next time could you tell me how you felt and wether you enjoyed it or not.
Ok Ms Petrus I will tell you how I felt.
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