This is a piece of writing that happened in my wonderful holidays.
Hope you enjoy
My Exciting Holiday
On the exciting holidays it was my Mother’s birthday, and we celebrated it by going to Mangere bridge. What we did was AMAZING!!. But, when we arrived and hopped out of the car, and walked around, it felt like I was in a crowded stampede of elephants!!. The thing that I was excited about was the Cake!!+ice cream.
When we got home we made a big BBQ with a side of pork. Then we made a homemade swing which nearly broke!!. After that it was dinner time,then when I got my delicious food it felt like I was in 'Foodtopia'. After that we went outside to go and try out the swing. It turned out that everyone could fit on it. The swing was made out of a chair and a rope. When we got on the swing, it felt like I was flying through the air like Superman!
On the next day the sun was shining and the breeze was flowing. My brothers and I, went outside to clean the outdoors. I came inside while my brothers were cutting the wood, so I decided to go outside and have a go and cutting the wood. I nearly hit my legs with the AXE!!!!!. So I used the little one. After I stopped cutting the wood, I went and picked up the wood to stack them all up inside the shed. There were still heaps of wood in the shed. I asked my brother to cover for me in stacking the wood, while I went back into the house to clean, which I didn’t, hahahaha.
