Thursday, 25 October 2018

The Adventures Of The Mayan Marvel

This week we have been learning how to write a description. It is when describe a picture. I really enjoyed writing about it because it could help me in my learning of describing things. 

Here is an example of my description.



The Adventures Of The Mayan Marvel 



The scared looking Flynn and Mia are trapped inside a cell with a policeman that was so suspicious. 

The policeman was wearing his police uniform and in it was a comb to make  him handsome and keys to lock people up in prison and he looked so suspicious because he was just looking at Flynn and Mia only. He was wearing sunglasses inside the cell. The policeman’s face was angry because his eyebrows looked down . His nose was giant and his mustache was looking weird.  

Mia was sitting on a table wearing a vest and a smooth necklace made with leather rope. She also had a shiny watch attached to her arm. She looked worried for uncle earl because he was missing.
Flynn was sitting on a table wearing striped black and white t shirt. He also had a shiny watch attached to his arm like Mia. He looked scared because of the horrible face from the awful policeman. Flynn was nervous because the face on the grumpy policeman was suspicious and he was looking angry because he maybe wanted the real truth so he could not believe them. So Flynn had to think away to find uncle Earl.

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