This week we have writing a persuasion. it is what you think to change other peoples minds. I have been writing fireworks should be banned. I really enjoyed writing about it because I could write why we should banned fireworks.
Here is an example of my writing about banning fireworks.
FIREWORKS SHOULD BE BANNED!
I think fireworks should be banned because it could disturb the neighbours when they sleep.
The first reason is that fireworks are dangerous, because they could go the wrong direction and burn houses down, and it might hurt kids when they go to close. When the kids go close to the fireworks they might sniff the smoke and they might run out of air.
The second reason is that it is a waste of money because it could cause heaps of damage. It could burn peoples trees down when it fell down it had its name all over the ground, and if they will bring a baby they might cry because of the loud banging noise.
The third reason is that the animals will get scared and runaway and the owner has to catch it before it will get lost, they might also get hurt when they run around and they will run into the fireworks. The animals might go back in there pet house because they will feel frightened.
Hi there Daniel, you have really thought about how fireworks affect people and our environment. You have got lots of good ideas about why we should ban fireworks. You know what, I agree with you. Can you think about another great reason why firework are a waste of money?
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