The Day I Saved The El Dorado

This week we have been writing about a story. But first our teacher had to tell us that story, then we imagine what it's going to be about and then we write about it. I found it interesting how we could imagine the story we wanted to write about.

Here is an example of my story about the day I saved the El Dorado.

The Day I Saved The El Dorado

One day I was walking around El Dorado when I saw a group of children fighting then I went to solve that big problem. Then I backed up because all of the parents came rushing to the children and they got a stick and kept waking them until they cried. After that I went back to my golden kingdom. At night time I went to sleep until people from the Spanish team came, shooting with there mighty guns. Then when they saw El Dorado they kept getting people out of there houses and tied them with ropes. After that the entire city was captured except me by those greedy Spanish People. Then after the Spanish army left one of them said “their gold is over there” then the other one said “we will get it tomorrow”. When I got out of my kingdom I was worried because everyone was covered in so much blood and they were tied up. Then I freed them but it was the morning and everyone was tired but there blood was dry. After that I had to go to the river to get some water to make there blood come off. Then I, The golden man, said ”we should prepare tonight for the Spanish People”. Then it was afternoon and we worked together as a team then we got some rocks and get some of my golden dust and put it on. Then at that night they put all of there fake gold in a wheelbarrow and gave it to the Spanish people, and then they said “well that was easy”. Then when they left me and my city celebrated. Then when the Spanish people went back to their base and one of them dropped the gold, then it cracked then they saw black in it and they went super mad. But it was past midnight so they had to sleep. Then in the next morning in El Dorado all the people were hungry and they asked me if, I could get them food but there was no more weapons. Then I got some of the people to help me create weapons so we made some spears,bows and arrows then we got poisonous frogs to go with the bowen arrow. Then we caught food for them. At night time everyone went dead asleep but I didn’t because I had to keep in eye if the Spanish people came back. So some of my soldiers helped me. We kept super quite like a sneaky ninja and then we suddenly heard footsteps coming out of the bushes. Then the Spanish People came and they wanted revenge then me and my soldiers got our arrows and the poisonous frog. But some of them survived and then they ran away. But it was lucky Because I had a pet that was jaguar and then it had to chase the survivors and get them and bring them back to me. So I can see why they came here. When I asked them why they came they just said “we came because we wanted your gold”. But I said 


“YOU CAN’T TAKE OUR GOLD OR ELSE MY PET WILL EAT YOU BECAUSE HE IS HUNGRY”. After that it was night time and my pet was hungry so I gave the Spanish people to it.