The Starving Reindeer

This week we have writing a persuasion. It is when you change peoples minds. It was about why does reindeer's need food. I found it interesting because last week our teacher showed us a video about it.

Here is an example about my persuasion.


          The Starving Reindeer

I believe Reindeers need food because they carry father christmas a lot.

First reason is that the reindeers do hard work too much because, they keep on flying around at night and they need food to make them powered up. When they go to houses they have to carry heaps of presents and that will make there back hurt. Reindeers should deserve food because they carry Father christmas too much.

Second reason is that when reindeers move around like a bird, but more bigger  sometimes they get hungry and they run out  of ENERGY!. So they need lots of yummy  carrots. When They stop at a house they rest  for a little while, then santa comes and then  porely fly away. 


Third reason is that when santa goes to  houses he eats too much COOKIES AND MILK, and the reindeers just ge nothing but wind. Then when they fly they nearly fall down because this time santa ate even more. Then they go around without stopping.