Thursday, 19 March 2020

Hatched

This week we have wrote a story on a google Docs of little girl who was alone, so we had to be creative and write it in our own words by not like, saying it is dark.

Here is an example.










There she was alone in the middle of nowhere with this old dark terrifying broken cabin, right behind her head. There were also skeleton trees everywhere that surrounded from left, right, back and front. Then she held the most enormous egg in the whole world, but then…..

she tried to crack the egg on her knees but she finally cracked it. Then her knees that were bleeding so hard that the dry grass was red all over the place. Then all of a sudden there were crowds of hunting crows surrounding her to see what would happen next, but still she had no fear. After that there was slimy gowey, sticky toxic yoke slowey dripping down her finger tips.

Then after that the clouds went smokey and the coldness flowing through her that made her have goosebumps all over her legs and arms. Then after that she heard the ground rumble and she saw the grass and the trees vibrating that it was moving the ground towards her. It felt like the biggest earthquake that had happened in the world.


Then it was so windy that the trees had been broken down into horrible pieces and that dry grass that was on the ground. So after Sapphire had opened the egg it was the most horrifying, enormous, dangerous beast that she could ever see in her whole entire life. 

But she wasn’t that scared because the hideous beast was actually a dragon. It was a dark red and dark blue kind of colour but it shoots a red orange fire into the sky to make the clouds look so smokin hot with a bit of dark grey to finish it off.


After the beast had awoken from its long slumber. So after that she started to run away from the evil blood thirsty crows coming down like jet-planes, and the ginormous dragon flying high up into the sky with all the dark grey clouds, but still Sapphire could see nothing. 

Then she ran to see where her dragon went, but when she looked up she could see him because there was a huge gap in between the clouds, but she thought the beast was dangerous but the dragon was actually trying to defeat the enemies, and then the left-over evil poisonous black feathered crows targeting her from behind.

Then she was running and running till…… she found a tree to hide behind it, then she peaked out to see if the crows had left, but they didn’t because she could hear them. After 2 to 7 minutes she peaked again, she saw nothing, so she ran and ran till….. 

She fell off a cliff, and she looked down and then….. she saw pitch black. After that, Sapphire thought she was falling down a dark hole. Then, all of a sudden Sapphire had woken up out of nowhere, and said “Was that just a dream or was it real?.”










                                              TBC 

                                                               To Be Continued



















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