The City Of Atlantis

for the past few weeks we have been writing about the mysterious city called Atlantis. We also had to write what has happened inside in the picture. What I learnt about this was really fun, because I could see things inside it like turtles and other sea creatures. I have enjoyed writing about this because we could be creative and write it.


Here's an example


                              Atlantis

7 years ago in the Atlantic Ocean, there was a sacred city. But it was not just an ordinary city it was………… ATLANTIS. So everyday in Atlantis ,there was heaps of traffic on the road and it was really loud. When people were driving there slow cars would honk their horn,s and the sound was so loud it sounded like a cow going mooooooooooooo and that had disturbed people. 

But on that mysteriously day when people woke up at about 4:25 am they heard the most powerful ocean rising up then……..

BANG!!!

The tallest skyscraper in their city has collapsed. So there was a short amount of kids awake  and the rest were dead asleep in their hotels. While they were sleeping there was a big siren that said “EVACUATE THE BUILDINGS I REPEAT EVACUATE THE BUILDINGS.” 

Then everyone woke up and ran but they ran because their lights had extinguished then it was really dark, While people were trying to run away to the water rising and rising until Atlantis had been sunk so deep that nobody could find it. After that it was the next day of the apocalypse for the city of Atlantis, but there were only 2 survivors remaining, Finn and Jakewere best friends. The things about them are that Finn is 15 and Jake is 14. So after that they had to think of a plan because sometimes Finn is sea sick , but when they went outside of their houses there was like an enormous flood all over the entire CITY. But what they did was that they tried to find a boat and some life jackets. But it took them 2 weeks but still, they couldn’t find it. So then they went to bed. 

Finally, the last day of nowhere to find help. When Finn and Jake woke up, there was water all over the floor, then they still tried to find a boat, then finally they found a boat and went off to find land.