Here is an example of my writing about Santa and his reindeer's.
News About Santa Arriving In New Zealand
Friday 12/25/2015
THERE'S BREAKING NEWS IN NEW ZEALAND! and it is about Santa and I am talking about the real one with the flying REINDEER's , and guess what sometimes he doesn’t fit inside the chimney because he eats to much cookies, and he drinks too much milks. But when he comes out he gets STUCK. Then when he squeezes out the reindeer's make a happy face because they thought that Santa had some nice treats like carrots. After that when he comes up the reindeer's were so excited but then Santa said” sorry there's no carrots”, then the reindeer's burst with tears because they were so tired and hungry.
When they go to another house the chair Santa sits on. It scrapes on the wall. Then when Santa went inside he thought about the reindeer's being so tired and hungry, and running out of energy. After that when, he looked out the window…he saw MCDONALDS so he went there and he asked the people if he could have some carrots and they said ”for who”. After that Santa said “it’s for my flying reindeer's” Then everyone was so surprised that it was the real Santa so they were normal. After that Santa went back up the chimney and then when he went near the reindeer's he opened the sack and then he said to the reindeer's “merry Christmas”. After that the reindeer's were so happy that they were happy like a dancing donkey.
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